
Introduction
As an HPL on the Illustration BA and MA at Camberwell, I run individual and group tutorials with students facilitating crits and tailoring feedback to help individuals progress their ideas within the parameters of the course. One of my students, who did not have English as a first language, had brought in a long form essay that was clearly heavily researched and must have taken her a long time to write but it did not fit the brief of a critical practice project. She redid the project as an interactive website, which gained her an A at assessement but she subsequently burnt out and had had to go into a residential mental health facility over the holidays. Within the context of the course, I gave her the right advice as her grade improved significantly, but at what cost to her mental health?
Evaluation:
Looking back on the interaction, I probably was not as careful with the way I worded myself as I could have been particularly since I had been seeing students all day and was tired at this point. In future I want to be more intentional about how I give feedback to all students as I cannot know what is going on for them behind the scenes.
In this interaction, think I created a “controlling discourse” as Barrow describes:
“the framework built on the basis of Christian confession enables the self to be subjected to a system of truth and to the authority of an authoritative individual (Foucault, 1983a)—whether this is theological and priestly, psychological and therapeutic, or disciplinary and tutelary (Rose, 1996a). This framework leads individuals to develop a manner of conducting oneself in the various aspects of one’s life (Rose, 1996a), and forms a controlling discourse so that people become individuals of a certain sort (Marshall, 1996).”
This is something I want to absolutely avoid in my teaching in future.
Challenges:
- As an HPL, I often don’t have time to get to know the students as individuals as I only see them every few weeks, and often for very short amounts of time.
- Even in situations where students have ISAs there is very little information that can help me contextualize what they might be struggling with.
- Student mental health is at an all time low across the UK, many of my students are extremely anxious and depressed.
Opportunity:
I want to reframe not only my feedback but the whole idea of assessment to students who are struggling with mental health issues.
Context:
In her introduction to Joy Centered Pedagogy, Camfield states:
“The statistics are alarming: rates of anxiety, depression, and suicidal ideation on college campuses have never been higher (Flannery, 2023), with 46% of faculty members saying their students come to them with a mental health concern multiple times a month or more and 55% of college students saying their mental health is their top stressor (Mowreader, 2023).”
The cost of living crisis, family pressures and a lack of job prospects, makes this a stressful time to be a student and as teachers we need to be prepared to support young people in our care. There is also a tendency for student to disclose to teachers either through their work or during tutorials which can be particularly difficult when we ourselves as teachers are facing these same challenges and often juggling teaching with other jobs and parenting means we have own mental health to contend with.
Plan of action in tutorials:
After brainstorming with colleagues during PG Cert sessions, I have come up with some ways in which I will frame my feedback in future to help students struggling with stress and mental health issues:
- When I speak to students, especially those I see struggling with stress and anxiety, I will remind them to always put their health ahead of their work and that no grade is worth burning out for.
- I will reframe assessment as just a snapshot of a single moment in their wider creative lives. These grades do not reflect their creative ability or their future prospects, just where they are in the present moment.
- I will remind them that a grade does not reflect on them as an artist or a person, and that it will have very little relevance after they leave UAL. I will refer to my own experience in which I did not achieve top grades in any of my degrees and yet I have a career as a working artist.
- After assessment I will offer them the chance to talk through the feedback and query anything they are concerned about.
- For students who do not speak English as first language, I will check in at the end of the tutorial to check they have understood what has been said, and that they know what to do next using translation software.
Plan of action in crits:
- Set up the space as a brave space that includes everyone and rewards risk taking .
- Take a moment to recognise each other’s humanity: we are all stressed and anxious, how can we use humour through an icebreaker question to lift that and create solidarity
- Send crit questions in advance so students can run them through translation software, and prepare answers if they want to.
- Make space for less confident students: Have students talk in pairs, so that everyone has a chance to be listened to even if they don’t want to speak in front of the whole group. Give the opportunity to give written feedback not just spoken. Run sessions conversationally in a symposium style rather than going through students one by one so they aren’t sitting waiting for the axe to fall on them.
- Give students something to do with their hands, a lump of plasticine to hold, a piece of string.
- Remind students that anxiety and excitement can feel the same in the body, could they take a moment to recognise which is which.
References/Bibliography:
Camfield, E.K. (2025) ‘Introducing Joy-Centered Pedagogy’, in Camfield, E.K. (ed.) Joy-Centered Pedagogy in Higher Education: Uplifting Teaching and Learning for All. Abingdon: Routledge, pp. 1–13.
Barrow, Mark(2006) ‘Assessment and student transformation: linking character and intellect’, Studies in Higher Education, 31: 3, 357 — 372